托福写作中常出现的错误及失分点

摘要:托福写作中常出现的错误及失分点

1.构造不平行面例:I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.当应用连词将一系列的单词连接起來的情况下,理应应用词性同样或同一种类的语句。



2.不明就里例:Many companies began using computers mouth.

3.文章段落太长,不按段主语与动词一致难题She are a good friend of mine that I has known for a long time.主语和动词在数层面不一致。

4.句子怪怪的We heated the soup in the microwave for too long and the shape of the container changed.用语太长或不清。换句话说,句子看起来滑稽可笑。

5.语法错误主语、动词或宾语不太好I want to buy something for my mother that she will like it. There was a terrible accident happen yesterday.句子的基础构造不太好 缺乏主语、动词或宾语,或是这种成份反复。

6.语调与文章内容不符合I was kind of mad at the guy who vociferated angry words at me. I have heard many wonderful things about such cosmopolitan cities as Paris, London, Tokyo, and Hong Kong and I would love to visit these cities to check them out.语调与文章内容别的一部分不相符合可能是过度宣布或是太不宣布。

7.代词代指模糊不清If people do not speak the same language, it has a greater chance of miscommunication. I intend to complete my studies in the United States because they have good programs there.代词特指代的标示词(介词所替代的专有名词)不清楚。

8.过度含糊We should use our resources on Earth because the Earth is getting worse. 句子或它所表达的意思过度含糊,不可以出示是多少信息。

9.动词时不正确Yesterday I will go to the store because tomorrow I needed some food.动词时不正确检查一下是应当用现在时、过去式、将来时還是完工了这些。

10.介词不必要I would like to discuss about something important that you mentioned about to me during yesterday. We went to downtown yesterday to buy a watch. When I first came to the US, I did not have a lot of friends in here. In class, my classmate never mentioned about her husband.在表达这类含意时此单词不可以与介词并用。

这类状况多见于downtown,home,there,here等词。这种词句在英语中是介词并非专有名词,因此不可以在他们前边加上介词。

11.偏题或不有关There are many reasons to buy a car, preferably a nice car.这个意思与okay for children to fail sometimes.所表达的意思很一般大部分人都早已了解来到,因此就沒有必需再聊出去。

12.标点符号难题I love animals. And I like to help them. Because they are helpless. So I want to become a vet.这是一个十分广泛的难题!很多学员在句子中应用了过多的逗号,尤其是当她们用手写的情况下。

13.反复数据冗余Personally, I believe what the newspaper prints.一种含意的描述不止一次,或是某一词句多余。

14.单数/复数Many year ago, dinosaur roamed the Earths.单词必须从单数变成复数,或是由复数变为单数。单数可数名词单数可数名词不可以独立应用,应当将其变成复数形式或是再加限定词(a, the, my, his, her, Gary’s, no, any, 1, 3, 50, most,这些)。

15.不必应用简称在宣布的创作中不必应用简称形式(can’t,don’t,it’s,we’ll,they’ve这些),而理应应用单词的详细理式(cannot,do not,it is,we will,they have这些)。

16.关联词语反复Since I want to go to a good school, therefore I am trying to raise my test scores.不可以在该句的关键主语和关键动词前应用连词。

17.句子不详细Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to getsintoscollege. For example, my friend in high school.句子沒有关键主语或关键动词,由于实际上它应是一个从句。这是一个十分普遍的不正确,改动的方式是将2个句子相互连接。

18.不必应用get When I got home, I got tired, so I got a book and gotsintosbed. Get太不宣布,含意也过度模棱两可,不宜用在宣布的场所。应将get改成一个更为实际的单词,如become, receive, find, achieve,这些。

19.撰写难以辨认信息不正确I would like to study in America because all modern technology originated there.传的信息不正确,或是令人听起来感觉将会不正确(假如的确是恰当的,理应表述为什么呢,由于阅读者不觉得是恰当的)。所述词组中,all的意思是100%;我们不能肯定地说每一件新物品都是以英国问世的。

为保险起见,理应应用many或most。非英文单词Computers are very helpful and advantageable.虽然看上去象个单词,实际上并不是,最少并不是个英语单词。应用这一单词的另一种形式。

20.找词不适当I was late getting home because I lost my way.在这类状况下不应该应用该词可挑选更好的词语或是所使用的词语与文章内容的整体语调不符合。

21.单词形式不善I want to creation a great web site so that I can becoming wealth.所应用的单词的形式不正确检查一下应当应用该词的专有名词、修饰词或介词形式的哪一种。

22.措辞不正确Even I don’t speak Spanish, I was able to find a bathroom in the department store. I gained a lot of pounds during vacation.措辞不正确或在此类状况下该词并不是最好措辞。

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