摘要:美国留学个人陈述写作十分关键，个人陈述能填补你的硬件配置伤，给自己的申请大大加分，因而经常能决策申请的成功与失败。尤其是在美国留学申请市场竞争日益加剧的今日，个人陈述的写作更显的关键。网编为大伙儿小结了在写个人陈述的开始段时要留意的难题，防止被一眼秒拒掉。一、反复个人简历型IearnedmyBach…
美国留学个人陈述写作十分关键，个人陈述能填补你的硬件配置伤，给自己的申请大大加分，因而经常能决策申请的成功与失败。尤其是在美国留学申请市场竞争日益加剧的今日，个人陈述的写作更显的关键。网编为大伙儿小结了在写个人陈述的开始段时要留意的难题，防止被一眼秒拒掉。
一、反复个人简历型
I earned my Bachelor of Science degree in … Sciences with a specialization in … in 2002 at … university
点评：美国留学个人陈述不必去重个人简历中的物品，这在许多 学校的PS规定中确立提及，个人陈述的写作要实际到恶性事件上，恶性事件处理上，而不必单纯性反复现有的內容。
二、学校详细介绍型
I am an undergraduate in…University , the largest university anda cradle of scientific and technological talents in China.
点评：该同学们的个人陈述开始等因此一个申请学校的介绍，这好像是在协助学校做宣传策划，或表述给你多掌握该学校，而不是写个人陈述了。它是没有意义的开始，浪费了字数，*非常容易被秒据掉。
三、剽窃句型型
As a student majoring in Computer Science, I began my odyssey since I entered undergraduate program. Indeed, having entered this splendid computer world, I am more than greedy for something new.
点评：Odyssey 和more than greedy for something new 这类句型不清楚是以哪儿学得的，许多 同学们再用。但你需要了解，外国人*讨厌剽窃，*爱原創，因此 利益关系大伙儿想一想吧。
四、救世型
I am a problem solver. I have an impulse as a kind of instincts to solvevarious problems before me and enjoy doing that. Since I was a little boy, a voice from President Franklin Roosevelt has constantly hovered around my mind, "The world can be changed by man's endeavor, …
点评：一副救世的品牌形象，儿时就受富兰克林的危害，志向*生产力。个人陈述的写作一定要个性化细化，别吹大牛，乃至带著一种单边主义逻辑思维。
五、犹抱琵琶型
Making a right decision at the right time is very important for a young people .At present, I have come to a critical point in my life when I have to make a decision concerning my future course of action. Only a perceptive understanding of oneself will enable one to chart his proper action. Aftercarefully thinking, reviewing my life and analyzing my personality, I make the determination and choose to apply for graduate study in XXX. And I choose to specialize in communications which I will pursue a lifelong career.
点评：关键放到自身要做重特大决策到了，人生道路的大转折，随后来上句说白了格言。消耗字数，比较有限的字数里，学生们应当学好立即，而且把握住关键，突显自身*有优点的层面，*有特点的层面。
六、言*气型
'Why the gecko can climb on the wall while we can't-' 'Why the leaves turn red in autumn' 'How many stars are there in the sky-' When I was in childhood, I always kept asking my mom all kinds of questions。I am especially interested in how things work, I can even take apart things for several hours in order to find out its principle.
点评：上去就儿时的记忆青少年自身怎样拥有 志向远大，who cares。个人陈述字数比较有限，却用这么多话叙述儿时，沒有一切实际意义。学校想要知道你怎样看待将来，而不是怎样渡过以往。
网编提示大伙儿，之上六种美国留学个人陈述的开始方法一定要竭尽全力防止，申请美国大学的申请人愈来愈多，申请市场竞争愈来愈猛烈，大伙儿精心准备的个人陈述期待变成大伙儿被入取的闪光点，而不是变成大伙儿申请取得成功的拦路虎。
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