摘要:美国出国留学申请到奖学金，*先要让奖学金评审委员会的另眼相看，次之，才考虑到toefl、GRE等硬件配置标准。因此即便硬件配置标准不突显，但奖学金申请报告获得评审委员会的亲睐，那获得奖学金的概率就会暴增。大家用事例来表明，美国大学奖学金申请报告应当要怎么写。Growingupinamodestvil…
美国出国留学申请到奖学金，*先要让奖学金评审委员会的另眼相看，次之，才考虑到toefl、GRE等硬件配置标准。因此 即便 硬件配置标准不突显，但奖学金申请报告获得评审委员会的亲睐，那获得奖学金的概率就会暴增。大家用事例来表明，美国大学奖学金申请报告应当要怎么写。
Growing up in a modest village in China, I hardly ever had the chance to see many examples of modern technology; people who dig wells by hand to obtain drinking water and use ox-driven plows to cultivate their fields don’t have much use for televisio and personal computers. But when my father gave me an old radio to play with, I wanted nothing more than to take apart the contraption and see what i ide made such interesting sounds. Sitting on the floor with a confused grin, surrounded by wires and metal, I looked up at my father and asked where the noises were...(有删节)
有效地阐述了申请人学习培训电子技术的主观因素，学习兴趣是评审委员十分看好的。另外，读过这一段文本，会使阅读者沉浸在对童年往事的美好记忆里，借此机会触动评审委员的心。
此外一篇改动过的文章开头用诗一般的語言写到(有删节)：
......I first read this paragraph from Madame Curie as a 14-year-old child, and I still remember how wonderful I felt. I remember thinking, "What esteemed men they were! How hard they worked!" As I grew older, this paragraph became a source of encouragement in the face of adversity. I begin to feel a magical blue light twinkling in my heart, kindling a love of science, and encouraging me to charge bravely into the unknown world.
末尾映衬了开始，阐述了创作者为何要去美国读书：
I never forgot my adolescent idol, Maria Curie. As I re-read the book, another pa age leaped out: "She was now 24-an age when some of her great contemporaries were to be on the brink of major discoveries... Maria took the train from Warsaw to Paris, the intellectual Mecca."
For me, the intellectual Mecca is the United States. ... I hope to continue my study and research, as detailed below. One day, I hope to find the pure esthetics of biology and reach its luminous summits.
我们可以想像地到，评审委员在学了这名女士的申请办理文章内容之后，脑海中里毫无疑问能惟妙惟肖地闪过出一个好学上进、填满志向远大的将来女科学家的品牌形象，为什么会不赞不绝口，全力以赴协助这一女士走上前去*研究胜地漂亮坚的飞机场，变成第二个居里夫人呢?
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