这些留学PS写作开头方式不可取

摘要:尽管美国大学留学的录取结果是根据综合性考虑GPA、规范化考试分数、及其课余活动等层面,但申请办理综合排行前50的高校,美国留学公文Essay自始至终是取胜阶段。除开CommonApplication系统要求的几篇Essay维持不会改变之外,各学校的Essay题型往年都是有一定的转变。可不管如何变,都…

尽管美国大学留学的录取结果是根据综合性考虑GPA、规范化考试分数、及其课余活动等层面,但申请办理综合排行前50的高校,美国留学公文Essay自始至终是取胜阶段。除开Common Application系统要求的几篇Essay维持不会改变之外,各学校的Essay题型往年都是有一定的转变。可不管如何变,都不外乎几类关键种类。文中对一些普遍Essay Topic开展了归类,并将每一类的写作构思和选料视角干了详解。



随话说开头难,留学PS写作被愈来愈多的人所关心,很多人针对留学PS的开始不知道道怎么写,进而随意的沉积一些不起作用的信息内容,它是不可取的。文中向大伙儿小结了六种留学PS写作开始方法是不可取的,那样的PS很容易造成 被拒。

一、反复个人简历型

I earned my Bachelor of Science degree in … Sciences with a specialization in … in 2002 at … university

点评:美国留学个人陈述不必去重个人简历中的物品,这在许多 学校的PS规定中确立提及,个人陈述的写作要实际到恶性事件上,恶性事件处理上,而不必单纯性反复现有的內容。

二、学校详细介绍型

I am an undergraduate in…University , the largest university anda cradle of scientific and technological talents in China.

点评:该同学们的个人陈述开始等因此一个申请办理学校的介绍,这好像是在协助学校做宣传策划,或表述给你多掌握该学校,而不是写个人陈述了。它是没有意义的开始,浪费了字数,*非常容易被秒据掉。

三、剽窃句型型

As a student majoring in Computer Science, I began my odyssey since I entered undergraduate program. Indeed, having entered this splendid computer world, I am more than greedy for something new.

点评:Odyssey 和more than greedy for something new 这类句型不清楚是以哪儿学得的,许多 同学们再用。但你需要了解,外国人*讨厌剽窃,*爱原創,因此利益关系大伙儿想一想吧。

四、救世型

I am a problem solver. I have an impulse as a kind of instincts to solvevarious problems before me and enjoy doing that. Since I was a little boy, a voice from President Franklin Roosevelt has constantly hovered around my mind, "The world can be changed by man's endeavor, …

点评:一副救世的品牌形象,儿时就受富兰克林的危害,志向*生产力。个人陈述的写作一定要个性化细化,别吹大牛,乃至带著一种单边主义逻辑思维。

五、犹抱琵琶型

Making a right decision at the right time is very important for a young people .At present, I have come to a critical point in my life when I have to make a decision concerning my future course of action. Only a perceptive understanding of oneself will enable one to chart his proper action. Aftercarefully thinking, reviewing my life and analyzing my personality, I make the determination and choose to apply for graduate study in XXX. And I choose to specialize in communications which I will pursue a lifelong career.

点评:关键放到自身要做重特大决策到了,人生道路的大转折,随后来上句说白了格言。消耗字数,比较有限的字数里,学生们应当学好立即,而且把握住关键,突显自身*有优点的层面,*有特点的层面。

六、言*气型

'Why the gecko can climb on the wall while we can't-' 'Why the leaves turn red in autumn' 'How many stars are there in the sky-' When I was in childhood, I always kept asking my mom all kinds of questions。I am especially interested in how things work, I can even take apart things for several hours in order to find out its principle.

点评:上去就儿时的记忆青少年自身怎样拥有志向远大,who cares。个人陈述字数比较有限,却用这么多话叙述儿时,沒有一切实际意义。学校想要知道你怎样看待将来,而不是怎样渡过以往。

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