摘要:提议一：防止空洞的英语单词和词组1.在托福写作考試中，一些空洞的英语单词或词组压根不可以为语句产生一切有关的或关键的信息，彻底能够被删除。例如下边的语句：Whenallthingsareconsidered,youngadultsoftodaylivemoresatisfyinglivesthant…
提议一： 防止空洞的英语单词和词组
1. 在托福写作考試中，一些空洞的英语单词或词组压根不可以为语句产生一切有关的或关键的信息，彻底能够被删除。例如下边的语句：
When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.
这话之中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得不必要。彻底能够除掉。改为：
Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
2. 一些空洞和繁杂的表达方式能够开展替换，比如：
Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
“due to the fact that”便是一个很典型性的繁杂的表达方式的事例，能够替换，简化为下边的表达方式：
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.
提议二： 防止反复
1. 在托福写作考試中，尽量减少多次重复使用一样的语汇。或是有的情况下尽管语汇沒有反复，但含意却有反复。此刻能够做一些简化的工作中。比如下边这一事例：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
large 对一个farm而言便是size层面的large，因此 in size能够除掉，改为：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更简约的表达方式为：
My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
2. 有时候一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换，比如：
My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.
这儿的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly，显得更加简约：
My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm
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