关于个人陈述开头的几种写作方法

摘要:迷人的美国留学个人陈述开头,较大的益处便是可以吸引住审查老师教授读下来的兴趣和冲动。那麼怎么才能做到那样的实际效果呢?开头的书写务必能推动全篇,使文章内容可以动的起來,也使文气可以维持下去,针对读者要能造成主观因素,使她们有往下看的驱动力,不然就变成一篇萎靡不振的文章内容了。直截了当法�D�D先启出…

迷人的美国留学个人陈述开头,较大 的益处便是可以吸引住审查老师教授读下来的兴趣和冲动。那麼怎么才能做到那样的实际效果呢?开头的书写务必能推动全篇,使文章内容可以动的起來,也使文气可以维持下去,针对读者要能造成主观因素,使她们有往下看的驱动力,不然就变成一篇萎靡不振的文章内容了。



直截了当法�D�D先启出关键,再根据恶性事件产生次序,将所闻所见写成:

I was lucky in the fact that I picked chemical engineering and it turned out to be the right choice for me. However, my first semester at college was a rude shock - being away from home for the first time, being in a relatively male-dominated field

I started in a test lab for airplanes, where I got to break things. That is called static and fatigue testing. Then I went into design for airplanes. I worked on all areas of commercial planes including the floors and windows. . I am most proud of my testing projects

引用法�D�D美国留学个人陈述开头引用各种各样材料,多方面引伸,做到吸引住读者,协助突显管理中心的功效:

When asked how to manage to mask remarkable statues, the French sculptor Auguste Rodin answered, “I choose a block of marble and chop off whatever I don''t need.” For me, life is just a block of marble---whether the marble can be turned into a remarkable statue depends on your natural talents, diligence and a sense of duty. During over four years’ my college life, I have been dreaming of being a perfect female researcher so that I can enhance more young girls’ confidence in scientific research and encourage them to promote the development of science as men do.

精辟设喻法�D�D留学ps开头设喻,以造成读者对要表明的事情或大道理的兴趣:

“Life is just like the ocean----whatever choice you make as a steersman, you must be well aware of your favorite, namely, which is worthy of pursuing in your whole lifetime!”

Since I was admitted into ××× university three years ago, these words, just like a bright lamp, have been lightening my future and leading the way to my favorite career--- the studies of educational technology.

情况渐入法:

1、 美国留学个人陈述开头引入家庭情况

My father is a chartered accountant and my mother is a banker. During my days at Engineering College I used to go to my father''s office and help him manage his portfolio of equities and other financial instruments. This was the time I learnt the first lesson of finance from my father i.e. risk and return are proportionate. In 1998 when I was in the second year the China stock market crashed. But fortunately, my father had a well-diversified portfolio because of which our returns were protected from the downside risk. This was when I learnt the second principle of finance from my father i.e. diversification reduces risk. While I understood these two principles intuitively, it produced in me a strong urge to learn and understand the complex theory behind the working of Finance. This, I believe, was a turning point in my career. I made up my mind to pursue a career in Finance and hence decided to do a Masters program in Business Administration.

2、 引入独特恶性事件,论述兴趣的发源

As I was finishing college, my mother had both of her hips replaced with artificial ones because all of the cartilage in her hip joints had worn away and it was very painful for her to walk. I found it fascinating that engineers, orthopedic surgeons, and biologists had all worked together to design these artificial joints that completely transform people''s lives by giving them back pain-free mobility, and I knew at that moment that this was an area about which I wanted to learn more.

美国留学个人陈述开头,引用,精辟设喻,另外应用了写作风格中的生活哲理型,创作句型中的会话式。因此要想让自身PS的开头吸引人,何不融合自身的特性,对之上开头开展综合性应用。

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